Sunday, May 3, 2015

Killer Earth Rough Draft

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Thank you and happy reading!

2 comments:

  1. What changes or processes occur that make water scare? Is it an environmental issue like over salination of water sources (caused by global warming) or is it a made made contamination like irradiation? Answering this question will have very important narrative and political consequences that are crucial to your vision of the future.

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  2. If you are looking for a new name for the rebel group, though I see nothing wrong with the tomorrows, Vanguard might be a good choice. The name would imply protection but with a militaristic connotation. Also, if the top 1 % caused the war an their aren't that much of them because they are at the top, how did they have the manpower to firebomb villages and reek havoc? Did they higher the 99% luring them with promises of inclusion into their society? What happens to these.. traitors? This could be a classic example of a proxy war being fought.

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